I like this one better

This is a weird version

You envy someone else’s life

because you do not know their strife

you do not know 

 The struggles they are facing

do you think you’ve got it hard

but some they have a granite shard

that’s piercing in their heart

and they’re just bracing

barely holding on to Life

just reaching for that greater height

swimming towards the surface

they are racing

our envies, our misplaced desires

achieved they will become The fire

to burn away the smoke

it is erasing

so be at peace in your own soul

And know in fact that you are whole

don’t envy the unknown

you are embracing